Key Improvement points to address
- Handshake seemed slow
- timings in middle of video- lip syncing looked off
- Floating heads- fade away at bottom so it doesn’t just cut off
- Shots with houses in background
- little bit samey
- needs more random shots between lip sync, needs to be more mixed between the two
- ethan parts are weak
- Include jack walking shot
- NEEDS WMG at start and end
- more use of frames in the video- camera, mirror
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